Behind The Scenes: The Evolution of The Train Rolls On
Updated: Aug 19, 2021
Since The Train Rolls On has officially been published, I thought it'd be fun to take a few of the finished spreads from the book and show you how they evolved throughout the course of the editing, illustration, and book design phases. This way, you essentially get a behind-the-scenes look at the steps involved in creating the finished product. Let's start with the very first spread:
Spread #1
The Finished Product
How We Got There
Here are the steps that we took to arrive at the finished product:
Original Text
Here comes the train!
Chugga choo choo!
The animals are eager
for their trip to the zoo.
Edited Text
Here comes the train!
Chugga chugga choo choo!
The animals are eager
to get to the zoo.
Final Text
Here comes the next train!
It's got work to do-
passengers await
a ride to the zoo.
Original Thumbnail Sketch
Original Full-Sized Sketch
Final Full-Sized Sketch
*Not much changed here except for the addition of the cardinal and the sun in the background.
Final Art
*Notice the name on the side of the train. This detail was added late in the illustration process.
Original Designed Spread
Final Designed Spread
*Here, we increased the font size and made some final edits to the text.
Spread #2
The Finished Product
How We Got There
Here are the steps that we took to arrive at the finished product:
Original Text
There's no time to waste.
They must depart soon,
for the zoo's grand opening
is THIS afternoon.
The animals are due
at their BIG DEBUT...
so the train rushes in!
Edited Text
There's no time to waste.
They must depart soon.
The zoo's grand opening
is THIS afternoon.
The animals are due
at their big debut...
so the train rolls in!
Final Text
There's NO time to waste.
They must depart soon.
The zoo's grand opening
is THIS afternoon.
The animals are due
at their big debut...
so the train rushes in!
Original Thumbnail Sketch
Original Full-Sized Sketch
Final Full-Sized Sketch
*Here, we added the cardinal and clock and softened the male lion's facial expression.
Final Art
Original Designed Spread
Final Designed Spread
*We increased the font size, adjusted the word placement, and made the refrain stand out.
Spread #3
The Finished Product
How We Got There
Here are the steps that we took to arrive at the finished product:
Original Text
Each ticket is checked
and given a punch.
The animals board.
They're a WILD bunch!
Each passenger's ready.
The crew is set, too.
The engineer signals.
Next stop: the zoo!
He calls "ALL ABOARD!"
once the coal's been poured...
and the train rolls on!
Edited Text
Each ticket is checked
and given a punch.
The animals board.
They're a real WILD bunch!
Each animal's ready.
The crew is set, too.
The engineer signals.
Next stop: the zoo!
The coal's been poured.
Now ALL ABOARD...
and the train rolls on!
Chugga chugga choo choo!
Final Text
Each ticket is checked
and given a punch.
The passengers board-
they're one eager bunch!
Each animal's ready.
The crew is set, too.
The engineer waves.
Next stop: the ZOO!
The coal has been poured,
so welcome aboard...
and the train rolls on!
Chugga chugga choo choo!
Original Thumbnail Sketch
*This thumbnail wasn't actually part of the original illustrations. It was added during a revision of the thumbnail sketches.
Original Full-Sized Sketch
Final Full-Sized Sketch
*We added the elephant and modified the crew member's nose on Page 6. On Page 7, we added the cardinal and moved the engineer inside the train.
Final Art
Original Designed Spread
